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a commission for :iconblueberrygoblin: very cool and cute character who prolly should not be allowed to carry them on a tray since, well hes doing a poor job about it lol

thank you once again for the commisisons i hope you like it and hope you other guys enjoy it c:

and id whats up with the bg lol
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

This is only my second critique so bear with me <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/let…" width="15" height="15" alt=":P" title=":P (Lick)"/>

I like the character itself a lot (I'm a sucker for characters with ears) She is very cute and I love the expression on her face. I'm very impressed with how accurate the hand looks (like any artist I struggle with hands and feet) but I think her legs are a little awkward. I know she's suppose to be in motion and maybe even stumbling forward(?) but the right leg being completely flexed up is kind of odd (but I'm picky)

The only complaint (besides the leg thing) Is probably the background. I like the checkerboard underneath but I think all the swirlys and bats sort of distract from the character and things around her (aka muffins, cookies, etc.)

~Sorry it took me so long to critique, but awesome job and I hope I helped a little ^_^